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TUTORIAL教程 10

Connect a short narrative连接一段短叙事

Keep participants, event time and purpose clear across three sentences.跨三个句子保持参与者、事件时间及目的清楚。

Useful preparation:学习准备:State an intention表达行动的目的 · Set the circumstances of an event交代事件发生的情境 · Report what someone says or thinks转述言语和想法 · Ask a question and report it提出问题并转述它 · State the condition and its consequence说明条件及其结果 · Explain a reason and identify whose it is解释原因并辨认其提出者

  1. 1 · Understand理解
  2. 2 · Write写作
  3. 3 · Compare比较
  4. 4 · Practise练习
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Understand and construct理解并组织

The soldiers were guarding the city. When the messenger arrived, the general gave money to the soldiers. They took up arms to defend the city.士兵们正在守卫城市。信使到达时,将军把钱给了士兵们。他们拿起武器,以保卫城市。

Vocabulary词汇

  • custōdiēbant: were guarding / 正在守卫
  • ubi: when / 当……时
  • dedit: gave / 给了
  • illī: those men, here the soldiers / 那些人,此处指士兵
  • sūmpsērunt: took up / 拿起了
  • dēfenderent: might defend, imperfect subjunctive / 以保卫,未完成虚拟式

Build the construction组织结构

  1. Begin with imperfect background guarding.以未完成时守卫活动作为背景。
  2. Use ubi plus perfect vēnit for the arrival and perfect dedit for the giving.用 ubi 加完成时 vēnit 写到达,用完成时 dedit 写给予。
  3. Use illī to resume the soldiers; after sūmpsērunt choose imperfect subjunctive dēfenderent for their purpose.用 illī 接回士兵;在 sūmpsērunt 后用未完成虚拟式 dēfenderent 表目的。

Write your draft写下草稿

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Mīlitēs urbem custōdiēbant. Ubi nūntius vēnit, dux mīlitibus pecūniam dedit. Illī arma sūmpsērunt ut urbem dēfenderent.

The temporal clause supplies the occasion; it does not itself assert that arrival caused the gift. Ut supplies an intended goal; it does not prove the defence succeeded.时间从句交代场合,本身不断言到达造成赠予;ut 交代预期目的,不证明防卫成功。

Illī avoids repeating mīlitēs, but repetition can be better where a pronoun would become ambiguous. The decision belongs to the paragraph’s context.Illī 避免重复 mīlitēs;若代词会歧义,重复名词可能更好。应依段落语境决定。

This is an authored example; other answers may preserve the intended meaning and fit the context.此为编写示例;其他答案也可能保留预期意义,并符合语境。

Change one choice, then connect the choices改变一项选择,再把选择连接起来

Variation 1变化练习 1

Add the general’s report that the city is safe at the time of speaking.加入将军的报告:城市在他说话时是安全的。

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Use present infinitive esse after dīxit.Dīxit 后用现在不定式 esse。
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Dux dīxit urbem tūtam esse.

Present infinitive expresses simultaneity relative to the past reporting.现在不定式表达与过去转述的相对同时。

Variation 2变化练习 2

Change the ending: after capture of the city, the soldiers fled. Compress the circumstance.改变结尾:城市被攻占后,士兵们逃走。压缩情境表达。

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Use the passive ablative absolute from tutorial 5.使用第5课的被动夺格独立结构。
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Urbe captā, mīlitēs fūgērunt.

Changing the narrative outcome requires an explicit new capture event; the absolute supplies it.改变叙事结果须明确加入新的攻占事件;独立结构补出它。

Variation 3变化练习 3

Add a direct command to guard the gate at the end.在结尾加入守卫城门的直接指令。

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Keep the quoted command in the plural imperative.引语中的指令保持复数命令式。
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Dux dīxit: “Portam custōdīte.”

Direct quotation preserves the address rather than turning it into an infinitive report.直接引语保留直接称呼,不改为不定式转述。

Explain and revise解释并修订

Review your work检查你的写作

Read in context在语境中阅读

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Original examples and explanations remain drafts pending independent language review.编写例答及解释仍为草案,等待独立语言审阅。

Keep or analyse a response elsewhere保存作答或送往其他工作区分析

Choose one response to export as a Syntax Studio source. Only that text is included; reflections and model answers stay outside this export. Import and a composition fork remain explicit actions in Cursus.选择一项作答,导出为 Syntax Studio 的源文本。只包含所选文本,不含反思或例答。在 Cursus 中,导入及建立写作分支仍须明确操作。